1) Type up your feedback in full including the ratings out of five for each category. 

POINTS:
Significance: 4
Structure: 3
Simplicity: 3
Research: 3
Total= 13 out of 20
WWW: 
  • Good introduction
  • Spoke well and loud
  • Inclusion of Institution and Media Knowledge 
  • Nice and Simple Slides
  • Decent amount of Media Language
  • Included Camera work and Analysing 
  • Colour Scheme - Consistency
  • Themes mentioned such as Black Feminism
  • Good Blog Research

EBI: 
  • The Introduction and Ending could fizzled out
  • More contextual Knowledge on the music group
  • Could of been more in depth on some topics
  • Face the Audience and pay attention to them
  • More Key Media terminology could be been used


2) Use this feedback and your own feelings regarding your presentation to self-assess and write a detailed WWW and EBI for your own research and presentation as a whole.

After presenting my presentation, i realised that i had a lot good and honourable things mention within my power point which was reflected through the fact that i had a lot of research.
However, this also meant that i was unable to go in depth and focus on some of the discussion and topics i was mentioning.
Also, the beginning and ending of my presentation could of been tighter making the presentation look more structured and stronger
Positively, i was very confident and fluent through the presentation and i was clearly very knowledge and interested on my text.


3) Write a paragraph discussing how your presentation will lead into your critical investigation. Some of this may refer to your feedback (a greater focus on media debates, for example) or in rare cases you may want to change the focus of your investigation entirely.

The presentation was very helpful towards my critical investigation because it meant i had to go back and do more research. Especially since i focused on creating a link between the film and the aspect of media institutions which was something that was slightly lacking in my summer research and i was able to go back and add to my work. 
Secondly, i was also missing some key themes and  media theorist within my summer research therefore i am know more knowledgeable on my text and discussion.




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