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  Salma Mahamed Mr Bush Media Y13 Coursework                          “So grab a gyal, yo darlin Gyal mi like de way you be movin” To what extent does the Afrobeats/Hip Hop hybrid genre reinforce an unrealistic and negative representation of women, with specific reference to the track 'Yo Darlin’’ by NSG ft Geko. As the music scene grows, it seems the objectification of women within music videos has become glorified and exacerbated. This is deemed as problematic as inclusive genres to this topic such as Hip-hop and Afrobeats are regarded as  highly complicated and multifaceted genre which are rooted and heavily revolve around complex social and political commentary, dating as far back to the 1960s and 1990s. Therefore the lack of empowerment and the emancipation of women in the music industry are substandard. This is symbolised and particularly evident in NSG's music video 'Yo darling' featuring Geko. In other words,“Women are increasingly becoming slave

  Salma Mahamed Mr Bush Media Y13 Coursework                           “So grab a gyal, yo darlin Gyal mi like de way you be movin” To what extent does the Afrobeats/Hip Hop hybrid genre reinforce an unrealistic and negative representation of women, with specific reference to the track 'Yo Darlin’’ by NSG ft Geko. As the music scene grows, it seems the objectification of women within music videos has become glorified and exacerbated. This is deemed as problematic as inclusive genres to this topic such as Hip-hop and Afrobeats are regarded as   highly complicated and multifaceted genre which are rooted and heavily revolve around complex social and political commentary, dating as far back to the 1960s and 1990s. Therefore the lack of empowerment and the emancipation of women in the music industry are substandard. This is symbolised and particularly evident in NSG's music video 'Yo darling' featuring Geko. The music industry fundamentally provides a platform,

WWW: Some excellent analysis and writing style is solid. EBI: More book references (at least up to 30-40) and the paragraphs need to more interlink and cross over better. in adddition, aim for more reference to theories and more quotes embedded.    Things to improve: Use at least 30 footnotes in the next draft due after the holiday Sort out footnote and bio. Use more references to theories and books. Look more on afrobeats and be more augmentative  Link my wider contexts better through the paras look into both contemporary and modern day audiences Use some more ideology and  reference to the institutional music state more Focus on adding more political and economical debates on the music industry.